This is a research paper for my Introduction to Literature class. The paper compares and contrast the form, style, and content of the following two poems:
Because I Could Not Stop For Death - Emily Dickinson
Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night - Dylan Thomas
Because I Could Not Stop For Death - Emily Dickinson
Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night - Dylan Thomas
Comparing
Death in Poetry
Summer
Calandra
LIT
100: Introduction to Literature
Instructor:
Alex Vuilleumier
January
27, 2014
There are many different feelings about death. It is
probable that no two people feel the same way or believe the same thing. The fact that our day is unknown makes the
topic of death a popular one amongst writers who seek to make sense of their
own emotions, and in so doing, help readers to make sense of theirs too. Emily Dickinson, author of Because I Could Not Stop for Death and
Dylan Thomas, author of Do Not Go Gentle
into that Good Night are two well-known and revered poets for their eloquent
capture of such emotions. Both of these poems explore
the themes of death and the acceptance of it, though the feelings about death
in Because I Could Not Stop for Death
are calm and reflective whereas in Do Not
Go Gentle into that Good Night the feeling are of a passionate rebuttal.
Because I Could Not
Stop For Death, by Emily Dickinson, is a narrative lyrical elegy of a
woman’s experience with death. Despite the morbidity of the topic, the tone is
not somber (Joly, 2002). Rather, the tone in this poem is thoughtful and
lighthearted. This is made evident by
the many literary tools that Dickinson employs, such as personification,
symbolism, and her stylistic uses of assonance and alliteration. Perhaps one of
the most notable uses of personification is in the very first two lines of the
poem “Because I could not stop for Death, He kindly stopped for me” (as cited by
Clugston, 2010, sec. 12.3). The capitalization of death makes this word a
proper noun, an indication that Dickinson intends to portray death as a
person. There is further evidence of
this when she refers to death as “he” who stopped for her, giving death once
again a proper noun and the human ability to stop and pick her up. Considering
death as a person is an important element in the speaker’s relationship with
death, and thus the mood, in this poem.
Seeing death as a man makes him less fearsome, particularly in the way
he “kindly” stops for her. Personifying
death also humanizes the experience of it, making it more acceptable and less
abstract. For example, many people find
it hard to imagine their death as there are so many questions that cannot be
answered in life – how will it happen, when, and what comes next? Humanizing
death makes the experience more relatable.
Further
in stanza one is the introduction of a carriage which she rides in with death
and immortality. Immortality, like
death, is personified with capitalization.
The presence of immortality is better understood at the end of the poem,
yet in stanza one, immortality’s presence suggest the need for a chaperone to
accompany a woman and a gentleman, as was customary in the time this this poem
was written (Joly, 2002). In this sense,
there is an implied comfort and trust in riding with death and immortality, not
just for the consideration death makes in stopping for her, but the formality
and recognition of propriety as well. Dickinson also suggest that the woman,
having accepted the ride from death, is now within death’s realm and therefore
immortality is present just as mortality would accompany life should such a
carriage also exist.
The ease in accepting the ride in death’s carriage is
continued to be felt in stanza two when the speaker begins to relate her
experience. “We slowly drove, he knew no
haste, and I had put away / my labor, and my leisure too, for his civility” (as
cited in Clugston, 2010, sec. 12.3). She explains that she has willingly put
aside her work and her free time to accept death, as death was polite enough to
show chivalry. This reiterates the tone of lightheartedness and acceptance, yet
at the same time, the imagery presented begins to build a feeling of
suspense. The reader is made aware of
the fact that there is a comfort in deaths presence with the use of the word
“we” (we slowly drove) yet in the same line, Dickinson switches to “he” (he
knew no haste), which reminds us that death is in charge and that she is at his
mercy. Such use of language helps to understand the theme of the death’s
control – that death comes when it may despite how unprepared one may be for
it.
Further imagery is presented in stanza three, as the
carriage passes school children playing at recess, a field of grains, and the
setting sun. In the four lines of this
stanza, Dickinson uses several literary tools.
The words “we passed” are an anaphoric reference to the journey of
life. Such repetition draws the attention
to the meaning in what they are passing and the fact that it is being left
behind. The children playing are
symbolic of childhood – the first stage of life. Ironically, the children are said to “strove”
rather than play at their “recess”, calling attention to the fact that they too
are unaware of the passage of time while their minds are on their labor
(strove) and leisure (recess), much like the speaker was when death came for
her. They pass next “the field of grazing grain” a reference to midlife. The grains have passed seed, come to full
fruition, and appear ready for harvest. This is symbolic of the establishment
and continued obligation that is typical in middle age. There is maturity, yet
further need to fulfill (harvest) ones duty. In the final line of this stanza
they pass “the setting sun” once again a symbol of the life cycle. The setting
sun in this case brings closure to the image of the speaker’s life. The fact
that the sun sets after the image of the grains allows the reader to assume
that the speaker is not in her elderly years as no symbolic imagery for old age
is presented, yet another implication that death has come before it was
expected. The set of the sun also assumes an increase of darkness and creates a
rising feeling of morbidity. The suspense at this point builds but the rhythm
and sounds of the words suggest the speaker remains calm, as evident by the use
of alliteration: “grazing grains” and “setting sun”. Alliteration, or the
repetition of the initial consonant sounds of two or more words, is an effective
device in drawing attention to particular words and creating desired moods (Clugston,
2010). The suspense continues to elevate
as the reader can assume darkness is drawing in, a lifespan has been passed,
and the carriage shows no sign of gaining speed nor stopping. With immortality
in tote time is no longer of the essence.
A slight change in the tone is presented in the next
stanza, as the speaker suggests that rather than the carriage and its occupants
passing the setting sun, the sun past them.
This reference infers that not only is the pace eerily slow, it is also
a delivery into the supernatural. The
sun is personified in its passing of them, making evident that they are no
longer within the confines of the cycle of life, but that they are now beyond
that point where the sun no longer rises and sets indicating time stands still
– a direct reference to the role immortality takes. Not surprisingly a chill is
upon them causing her to quiver in her sheer clothing. Referencing a chill, or
feelings of being cold in literature, is symbolic of death, a ghost, and the
afterlife. “The dews grew quivering and chill, for only gossamer my gown, my tippet
only tulle” (as cited by Clugston, 2010, sec 12.3). Again, Dickinson uses
alliteration to draw attention to the speakers clothing. Her gown is gossamer, a fine sheer material,
as is her shawl made of tulle. These
garments are evidence that death has surprised her and come when she was
unprepared, which is central in the theme of this poem.
The destination of the carriage becomes obvious in the
fifth stanza of the poem, when death arrives at a grave. The poem refers to this as “a house that
seemed / a swelling of the ground; the roof was scarcely visible, the cornice
but a mound” (as cited in Clugston, 2010, sec 12.3). This is strong visual of a
freshly dug grave, though instead of referring to it as such, the speaker calls
it a “house”. The avoidance of morbid
words like grave, cemetery, or tombstone keeps the tone lighthearted and
conveys an acceptance of the change. The particular choice for “house” insinuates
an active presence that the speaker will take there rather than a final resting
ground. An active presence then implies
life after death, or rather, immortality: a companion that was introduced in
the first stanza of the poem. In
finalizing the poem, Dickinson reveals that the speaker has been dead for
centuries and is narrating the story as a thoughtful reflection on the day she
“first surmised the horse’s heads / were toward eternity” (as cited in
Clugston, 2010 sec 12.3). The poem ends
on the word eternity leaving the reader pondering the word and considering,
once again, the many points that the poems theme makes. Death takes us whether
we are ready or not and is but a passing from one existence to another.
In a sense, Because
I Could Not Stop for Death romanticizes the passage from these existences
(life to immortality) by the personification of death as a gentleman that has
lured her into its chariot, much like that of Greek mythology. The theory of
life after death, or rather, existence after death is a common notion, one that
is feared as much as it is relished. For
instance, in Christianity it is thought that after death one’s soul is either
delivered to heaven or to hell. In this
sense, the immortality in Dickinson’s poem is the eternity spent in either
place. Ironically, immortality is
presented in this poem as an eternity in death, rather than eternal life. This is
a rather subjective point though as the personal perspective of the speaker is
not made available.
Similarly, the central theme in Dylan Thomas’ poem Do Not Go Gentle into that Good Night is
death, though the tone and attitude towards death are completely opposite of
Dickinson’s poem. The poetic form is lyrical elegy, which according to Clugston
(2010), lyrical poetry “expresses a poet’s thoughts and imagination. Its melody and emotion create
a dominant, unified impression” (sec. 11.3, para. 1). As such, much of the
content in this poem can be considered subjectively. The writing style is less
straight forward as his ideas are presented metaphorically with striking
visuals that rely greatly on one’s interpretation to form an understanding. The
diction Thomas used in this poem sets the tone and is central to conveying the
theme and its meaning.
For
instance, the first line of the poem “Do not go gentle into that good night”
(as cited by Clugston, 2010, sec. 12.3) is a strong statement that seems to
contradict itself if it were to be taken denotatively. There seems little reason to not go gentle
into something that is good. However, when followed by the next line of the
poem: “Old age should burn and rave at close of day” (as cited by Clugston,
2010, sec 12.3) it becomes more apparent that “go gentle” and “good night” are
to be taken connotatively and are symbolic of the dying process. The mention of old age alerts the reader to
the fact that death is even more imminent.
The references to day and night are symbolic of life and death, as seen
also in Dickinson’s poem. However, there appears to be more contradiction in
old age burning and raving against death.
It is natural to assume that at the end of a long life, old age would
prefer a gentle slip into a good – or welcomed - death. Thomas asserts otherwise; he generalizes that
old age should not give into the ease and comfort of death, but rather should
contest violently against it. At this point in the poem, the reader is left
uncertain as to why Thomas makes such unnatural declarations. It is not until
the last line that the reader is made aware of the personal stake that the
speaker has in his demands for life. If for any reason the subject of death is
unclear, the last line in the first stanza makes the strongest and clearest
statement of all. “Rage, rage against
the dying of the light” (as cited by Clugston, 2010, sec 12.3). There is powerfully felt passion in this
line, so much so, that this line is widely quoted for its impact and depth of
feeling. The repetition of the word rage accentuates the desperation for the
fight against death, though there is as much pleading in the delivery of the
line as there is commandment. This duality draws attention to the deep rooted
weakness and power that coexist in the human spirit.
The next
four stanzas of the poem present the speakers argument for preserving life with
the mention of four types of men: wise, good, wild, and grave. These men are
generalized, just as old age was, asserting that despite the life that such men
have lead, they too refuse to accept death in their old age. Beginning with wise men, the speaker states
that such men “at their end know dark is right” (as cited by Clugston, 2010,
sec 12.3), a notion that the speaker acknowledges the hypocrisy of denying
death. Though despite such knowledge
wise men do not go gentle “Because their words had forked no lightening” (as
cited by Clugston, 2010, sec 12.3), meaning they have not managed to make great
changes to society and therefore refuse to die. Good men are mentioned next for
their good deeds, but that the frailty of their deeds failed to have a more
beautiful setting to shine in, and as a result, they too should rage against
the dying of the light (Lord, 2002). Thomas uses figurative language to make
this point by describing a bay that the deeds might have danced in had they had
the chance. The use of the word “forked” with the wise men followed by “frail”
with the good men swing the visuals, and the sound of his words, from rough and
punitive to gentle and meek. Again there is a contradicting duality in the
words that Thomas uses, alluding once again to the nature of the human spirit.
He continues this figurative language in the argument for wild men, stating
that wild men, having late regrets for their reckless actions, do not succumb
to death. Nor grave men, whereas in
their poor health even blind eyes “blaze like meteors and be gay” (as cited in
Clugston, 2010, sec 12.3). In using the first simile in this poem, Thomas
asserts that blind eyes still find purpose. An example that, regardless of the
physical inabilities that accompanies old age, there is no limit to the
happiness that life can offer and that it is not only possible to defy death,
but to do so with a “blaze” – an unapologetic conviction. Thomas
generalizes these four types of men either to point out that all men find
themselves into one of these categories, or that each description is
characteristic of one man in particular.
The poem
closes with an apostrophe as Thomas speaks directly to his dying father which
confirms that he has a personal stake in the matter. His feelings are addressed literally when
calling to his father at the “sad height”. Height in this sense is a metaphor
implying his father’s closeness to death (Lord, 2002). Such emotions are
further presented through the paradoxical words in the next line, “curse,
bless, me now with your fierce tears” (as cited in Clugston, 2010, sec 12.3). To
be cursed and blessed are powerful opposites and propose the ambiguity that
Thomas feels in accepting his father’s eventual demise. Thomas begs his father for tears as evidence
that he will fight against death, a blessing, but yet a curse as his selfishness
overcomes his father’s needs. The final
words of the poem are once again “rage against the dying of the light”, a
blatant cry to his father to not gently pass away (BBC, 2008). The repetition
ends the poem fiercely, yet leaving it open without a sense of closure. There
is no response to his argument against death. This leaves the reader to assume
what happened, though the outcome is less of a concern in this poem since life’s
outcome cannot be avoided.
It is
evident that despite the shared theme of death there are more contrasting
issues between these two poems than there are similarities. Dickinson’s poem is
a female speaker discussing the day she accepted death after she already died,
while in Thomas’ a speaker is crying out against the death of his father,
arguing that all men in old age must fight fiercely against their inevitable
“good death”. Thomas’ speaker, presumably male, addresses his father directly
in what appears to be his father’s last days or hours of life. The two
extremes, calm acceptance and adamant rebuttal of death are seen in these
poems. Consequently, the entire tone and imagery that the reader is presented
with is oppositional as well. In Because I Could Not Stop for Death, death
is personified into that of a chivalrous male seducer whom she appreciates for
his consideration in stopping for her (Engle, 2002). In Do
Not Go Gentle into that Good Night, death is clearly the enemy and that
which must be avoided at all costs.
Dickinson and Thomas differ in form and style as well,
though they have similar qualities in iambic qualities. Dickinson’s poem is a narrative lyrical elegy
and is longer than Thomas’ as she uses short lines that break her thoughts up in
a rhythmic fashion. She has an elliptical style that requires the reader to pay
close attention to the implications of her metaphors, symbols, and other
devices. Rather than being thorough in her explanations, she leaves plenty of
room for interpretation. Her writing is formal and controlled with every other
line in her quatrains switching from either four iambic feet (iambic tetrameter)
to three feet (iambic trimeter), though the formality of her style is muted
slightly by the casual tone she takes in her diction. The emphasis Dickinson
places on the sound and rhythm of her work lightens the delivery of the morbid
theme. Dylan Thomas’ poem is also considered lyrical poetry, through the
structure is villanelle – a nineteen line poem made up of five tercets and one
quatrain (Cengage, 2014). The meter in the poem is iambic pentameter as each
line in his poem has ten syllables, breaking it down into five iambic
feet. Like Dickinson’ poem, the iambic
rhythm adds to the flow of the poem, though the difference in iambic meter
makes Thomas’ sound much more long winded in comparison to Dickinson. This adds to the gravity and seriousness of
his tone and accentuates the plea he makes to his father. The lack of quick
closure to his sentences is evidence to this as short bursts of thought would
not adequately dictate the complexity of his grief. His diction is full of hard
hitting visuals with rough verbiage. He
avoids smoothness in his work, thus reinforcing distress and sense of unease he
emotes.
These poems differ in rhyme as well. Dickinson’s rhyming,
while consistent and expected, changes word families every stanza while Thomas’
rhymes throughout the entire poem stay in the same family as “night”, the last
word on the first line and “day” the last work of the second line. The use of these rhymes throughout are not coincidental;
Thomas uses them to reiterate the contrasting feelings of life and death. Ironically, despite the message to battle
death that the speaker presents, not once does the word “fight” get used in the
rhyme scheme. Yet where they differ,
these poems once again find themselves alike as such avoidance of direct
verbiage in expression is similar to the style Dickinson uses as well. Dickinson too avoids the direct reference of
the issue as she replaces the word “grave” with house at the end of her
poem.
Continued similarities are found in their stylistic use of literary tools. Both poems have a heavy use of metaphorical imagery and personification of death and objects presented to the reader. The use of nature in such figurative language is found in both poems as well, as Dickinson describes the scenery she passes in the carriage while Thomas uses nature to point to specific feelings he seeks to address. Additionally, both poems use day, night, light, dark, and the sun as a symbol of life and death. These symbols are common in literature and provide a universal understanding. Addressing the theme through the use of symbols such as night and day add layers of emotion and complexity in their contrasting natures. Metaphorically, day and night also represent the opposition or acceptance towards death that teeter back and forth in the human spirit. This acceptance or opposition is a shared theme of both poems.
Continued similarities are found in their stylistic use of literary tools. Both poems have a heavy use of metaphorical imagery and personification of death and objects presented to the reader. The use of nature in such figurative language is found in both poems as well, as Dickinson describes the scenery she passes in the carriage while Thomas uses nature to point to specific feelings he seeks to address. Additionally, both poems use day, night, light, dark, and the sun as a symbol of life and death. These symbols are common in literature and provide a universal understanding. Addressing the theme through the use of symbols such as night and day add layers of emotion and complexity in their contrasting natures. Metaphorically, day and night also represent the opposition or acceptance towards death that teeter back and forth in the human spirit. This acceptance or opposition is a shared theme of both poems.
Emily
Dickinson’s poem speaks about human nature.
Often time, we are too busy to realize that death is coming whether we
are prepared for it or not. Likewise,
for many people Thomas’ poem is easy to emphasize with, as it is likely most
people have, or will have, to experience the loss of a loved one. Though once again we expect this as the
inevitable, the way we come to accept death differs from situation to situation
and person to person. The themes in these two poems both revolve around such
acceptance. Emily Dickinson’s poem offers feelings of reflection upon the day
she allowed death to guide her to eternity.
She expresses calm acceptance of death, whereas Dylan Thomas’ poem
grieves the likely loss of a loved one as it pleads and argues that old age
should not be reason to accept death – old age should rage against this finale.
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